Friday, November 11, 2011

Interview with Chris Turner

We happened Chris Turner at Librarythingy and were positively overjoyed to find a novel about pirates written in a style reminiscent of 'Treasure Island'.  As huge fans of that classic and of course the movies 'Pirates of the Caribbean' we just had to snatch a copy and read it.  (review next week!)

But we were also delighted to find an author could intelligently discuss his craft and question some of the current 'fads' in fantasy writing.  So of course we just had to interview and feel this is a must read. Check out his blog for more wonderful insights into a wonderful literary mind!
So here it is—Our interview with Chris Turner author of Freebooter which can be found
First of all tell us about you, and your novels?

You're a fantasy writer...what is your background and education?

I’m kind of a hard person to type cast.  I have many interests in many fields: arts, science, history, philosophy.  In the past I’ve engaged in various professions.  My background is computer science (BMath CS/EE) and I have been a software designer and programming instructor over the course of several years.  I’m a landscape oil painter as well, a once avid musician, and now somewhat of a writer.  The bulk of my creative writing has been based on adventure—due in large part to the chunk of my formative years spent on the road, backpacking, cycling in Asia and Europe.  I acquired a head-full of ideas and images of exotic cultures, which, coupled with my love for heroic fantasy and sword and sorcery, started a whole world-building channel.

 Who are the driving influences of your fantasy induced writing?

Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings, then I graduated into the more exotic worlds of Jack Vance and Fritz Leiber.

Who do you most identify with and possibly try to emulate?

I identify more with Vance than anyone, particularly “Tales of the Dying Earth”, but try not to duplicate him or any of my other influences.   If I ever do write at the level of any of the afore-mentioned luminaries, I would be pretty joyous!

Tell us about your novels out now. 

I have published four books: Denibus Ar, an archaeology adventure, the Rogues of Bindar fantasy-adventure trilogy, and two short story anthologies, Fantastic Realms and Future Destinies, fantasy and SF respectively.

Do you tweet or facebook?

I have tweeted and FB’d for a few months now.  Both are pretty powerful tools, but as I’m seeing, I’d rather spend my time working on new tales than tweeting, “Here, buy my book, buy my book!”

Do you interact with you faithful readers and what do they demand from you?

That’s the greatest thing—and as yet, no demand.  Probably the most satisfying feeling is hearing from someone who has read one of my works, even a short story, and has expressed how it affected them.  It’s still early in the game in terms of promotion, so I can’t say that I have yet a lot of fans.

Who is your biggest supporter?

My mom, a great editor, has been a source of inspiration for a long time now.  My friend, Suzanne, also has given valuable feedback and read all my stuff (a few times over) and provided inspiration when the chips have been down.

Who do you run to when you hit a problem in your writing?

A demiurge?  No, seriously, I let it sit for a while, and ultimately find that some workaround manifests.  I’m savvy to my inner process by now, so the more relaxed I stay, the faster I get the job done.  I just let the creative process flow.  Any time I try to force anything, the channel will shut down.

Okay down to some nitty gritty questions (The gloves have come off. Feel free to be expansive and just let it rip. We're looking for ways you defy the conventional mindset of writing.)

Chapter endings.  Do you hook to the next chapter?

I hook only in the sense of leaving the section off on an interesting note.  I get tired of cliffhanger sequences which I see in a lot of books.  It’s somewhat of cliché.  Certainly it does encourage the reader to read on and find out what happens . . . but at the end of the story, what does the reader really remember?  It’s the underlying theme developed by an exciting plot and memorable characters.  So, aware of this, I try to get the characters to stay more in character than anything.  Fooling around with tricky or dramatic chapter endings doesn’t work for me.  If the chapter ending sounds natural, not ending on a ‘forced’ note, then it automatically hooks for the next section.
What are your feelings about dialogue tags and how do use them? ( We know you covered it on your blog and this might be a good op to link your blog to ours.

I personally use a lot of saidisms (‘shouted’, ‘moaned’, ‘cheered’, ‘murmured’, etc) which are considered taboo in many schools of writing.  I do this not necessarily to be different but because I find it adds a lot of colour to characters if used in correct context.  I find it’s also a more interesting way to write.  The characters I’m predominately building are eccentrics and ‘goers-against-the-grain’, people full of bravado and invested with an expressive grandiosity.  The tags help to convey subtler manners of these folk, or at times, the more exaggerated sense of their feelings and emotions, which many times can’t be expressed in a ‘he said, she said’ straight dialog.

Villians, Villians, Villians.  How do you use them in your novels?  What do you hate about today's fantasy and it's use of villians.  Can a villian have a heart and still do evil things?

Yes, villains can be multi-dimensional definitely!  I’ve heard many times that a story is only as good as its villain(s).  Take the Batman movie, The Dark Knight, for example, with the star performance by the late Heath Ledger.  The Joker (the villain), is a cunning chap, and quite an intuitively funny rogue, because he has so much insight into the human condition and he makes Batman look a little shallow (although we all love Batman).  So we get two ‘heroes’ at once, and can relate to either of them.  While I don’t claim to have written stories as good as this, I do try to cross the line between good and evil in the characters I create because it makes for a more provocative story.  Sometimes “good” persons do ‘stupid or bad’ things and sometimes “bad” persons do ‘clever or unexpectedly endearing’ things.  This is hard to pull off in writing—to stay within the realm of plausibility while violating potentially certain expectations.  The risk I’ve found is that these ‘grey-area’ characters and a somewhat unorthodox handling of dialogue, may not suit every reader.

To be or not to be used...The hallmark of show is action verbs. the stronger the verb the stronger you can show the reader what happens.  To be verbs, especially was...stell the reader and slow down the book.  what are your thoughts on to bees?

I think verbs really give ‘dimension’ to a story’s action.  Dull verbs and/or a greater emphasis on nouns, for instance, make readers fall asleep (unless the author is writing passive, literary-type prose where there is an implicit expectation from the reader that it is written in a more documentary-style).  This doesn’t work in action-adventure.  Still—it is difficult even for experienced writers, I would suspect, to find the perfect verb at times; hence, the need for many re-writes and a lot of incisive feedback from readers and editors alike.

Do you plan out you novels with an outline?  if  so, has a character ever took a detour on you from the outline, especially one that can detour the book?

Yes, I do try to plan things out, especially in short stories.  There isn’t enough time for detours or subplot.  In larger works, there’s more scope for backstory and subplot, however, and often these are more enjoyable to write, just because there’s that extra bit of freedom and creative licence.  But at the end of the day, the story has to be told and the writer must deliver a beginning, middle, and end, and provide some satisfying resolution to the conflict.

I know from experience that characters in my mind are generally never explicitly-formed in the beginning.  They grow over time.  The detours I’ve come to expect are those which help me shed light on the characters’ mettle and his/her inner workings.  I let them wander a bit, see where it takes them.

Are you the I-guy in your novels?  Where do come up with your charicterzations and how do envision them 'arcing' in the novel?

An interesting question, which I’ve often reflected on, as I’ve been analyzing the craft of fiction writing for some time. 

I’ve written three short fantasy-sf tales in the first person (The Jisil-ou-az-lar, Sundered Lineage, and The Bones of St. Isis), all stories I’m pleased with, though the majority I’ve written are in third-person narrative.  First person is a tough POV—one where the reader can intimately get into the head of a character.  I never play ‘myself’ as the POV character; it’s always someone else, but I draw on my own experience to imagine what it would be like for that imaginary character to be caught in the dilemma of the drama.

From the novel-writing perspective, integrating character with plot is a slow process.  I have an idea of a character, then I see where that character might be in some snapshot of setting.  Then I ask what is that character going to do?  Say character x interacts or meets up with character y.  Then what happens?  If the result seems stupid, I nix that plot thread and try meeting them up with character z?  Yeah, possibly better!   More interesting drama.  So after about a hundred different possibilities running through my mind, I get a small sequence which seems engaging.  Then I take theme into account.  Does the sequence fit in with that which moves me?  If not, I put it aside or modify it to suit.  A brute force technique, perhaps, but the somewhat easier way is to take character A and imagine the same character at scenario 2 in the future.  How did character A go from point 1 to 2?  Well, ultimately back I go to Method 1!  Biting nails, staring off into space, munching a bit of apple pie . . .

Okay, a little crude.  All these thought processes are really going on at once: character has traits, theme is a driving issue on deciding which consequence of action work or not, and setting, well, may even be the trigger for plot.  I use both the methods as simplifications for a difficult task.  Method 1 works well for me when trying to come up with something completely and zanily different.  Method 2 is better applied when I have more of a definite idea of where I want the story to go.  Having the final result in my head . . . then it’s just a matter of rigging it up.  As for how all this takes place, I have no clue.  The process is too complex.

What tips would you pass on to a 'newbie' writer?

Writers should be themselves.  They should write what interests them.  Writing thrillers or serial crime fiction because it’s popular and sells is a bad idea.  Similarly, writing Harry Potter and YA vampire because everyone likes them and they’re accepted is equally as bad.  I emphasize, writers should be themselves and write what interests them the most.  It seems as if there is an underlying urge for writers (many of them Indies) to fit into a mould and write something that is ‘popular’ and hence earn higher star ratings and ultimately get sales.  But this is a bad motivation, in my opinion, because, it will backfire and likely not be from the author’s heart.

Your'e writing a new series.  Tell us about it?  Where did you get the idea from?

The Rogues of Bindar series which is finally completed, began as a short story several years ago while I was musing on a seashore in Nova Scotia watching fishing boats and fishermen.  I’d taken a long break from writing and thought it was time to start priming the juices again.  More and more ideas started coming and the ‘short story’ grew into a ‘monster’ (jokingly) trilogy.

‘Joking’ is the key word here, because although there is a lot of action pervading the series, deep down the story really touches on the idea of the illusion of life, and the comic futility of ambition and desire.  Somewhere all these very human motives dissolve, for hero and villain alike, and the last laugh is on everybody. . .   Good and evil are perhaps not what characters think they are.  Do villains get their just rewards?  Do heroes get the gold in the end?  Well, maybe both, and maybe neither.

I’ve been playing with themes of outlaws for quite a while now.  I had written a novel about a decade ago (unpublished, ‘Outlaws of Felasia’), and it was a practice run for Rogues of Bindar.

Rogues of Bindar deviates from the traditional fantasy form in several ways; one, in that it centres on deviants, eccentrics, recidivists, lawless adventurers and misfits with weird senses of humour and turns of phrase, characters who don’t talk in the normal pulp-fiction way of being.  Nor is the tale the traditional Robin-Hood type outlaw adventure where ‘hero fights for the poor, and outwits the evil sheriff’ or liberates the poor starveling masses from the world of oppression and tyranny.  At times, the story devolves into farce, even though said rogues are struggling to stay alive at every instant in a very harsh, but colourful world.  The protagonist, being a conniver at heart, is a ‘likeable rogue’ who strays not infrequently into anti-hero territory, and makes the tale somewhat quirky and possibly not the favourite of every reader, particularly ones looking for mainstream heroes.

Any sage advice you'd like to pass onto newbie writers?

Writing is more about an inner process than selling books.  Not everyone is meant to be a best-seller—although every writer wishes it, and must ultimately come to terms with this fact.  I think it’s what authors gain out of writing their tales more than public opinion.  The worth may be judged by time, rather than any immediate response.  There’s always a very large question that every author eventually asks himself—and that is, ‘why am I writing this story?

Thank you Chris, we really enjoyed this interview and your insightful answers.  Good Luck and happy sales!

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Interview with Susan Stec author of 'The Grateful Undead: They're So Vein."

Interview with Susan Stec author of  'The Grateful Undead: They're So Vein." 
(Our questions are in green and her delightful answers are in gray.)

First of all, a belated congrats to one of my favorite authors and good friend Susan Stec on the publication of her novel through--.  We know how hard you worked on the "Grateful Undead."  Can you tell us a little about the process of being accepted and what trials you endeavored through the publishing process?

I don't have an agent, queried a few, but that didn't pan out. Tons of rejections and a few with very helpful suggestions, but no one put a pen in my hand. Couldn't figure out what I was doing wrong so I started following agents on twitter and their personal blogs. At the time, all I heard in my genre were agents, editors and publishers saying, "If I have to read one more query with vampires or werewolves I'm gonna puke. Come on people! Can you say, 'original'?" It seems I'd started querying during the Twilight craze, when the market was flooded with vampire books. So, instead of using the 89,000 word manuscript for kindling or toilet paper, I bucked up, put the book aside, waited a year, and wrote two more in the series. Then I began to query again. Only this time I bypassed the agents and hit small press publishers. Black Matrix offered me a contract about three months later.

Can you tell us some of the things you're doing to self-promote your novel and what results you have achieved?  Anything you would do differently?

I set up a website, twitter account, Goodreads and Facebook accounts, and a Grateful Undead blog. Made three trailers (that was a blast), and yes that is me on the toilet at Walmart, The before pictures are my mother, sister and daughters, and (I have no shame, hell none of us does) that's me in the True Blood Parody trailer too. I did a Skype and Talk Radio interview with Candy O'Donnell and a blog interview with the author of Invisible, Jeanne Bannon, on her website. Had a ball at a book signing recently and have another set up in December.

Persistence is the key word. I believe to achieve results and generate book sales we as authors need to be proactive, Brian. I hand out business cards, send flyers, make phone and personal sales calls to local bookstores in my state, and write my name and book title on the stall of every public restroom I visit… with colorful indelible markers. I may start doing graffiti in the spring. LOLOLOL

So far, the only thing I would have done differently would have been to start writing earlier. I'm having too much fun to quit now.

Obviously supernatural romance is hot and just seems to burn hotter every day instead of fading.  Could you give us some of the titles that should be considered the 'trail blazers' of this genre as well as some must reads?

I don't think I read much heavy supernatural romance; my taste is more Urban Fantasy-humor. That's what I write. Think Sookie Stackhouse vamps fanging up Stephenie Plum's cousins. Yep, that'd be my family, with fangs.

Ok—let's get to 'The Grateful Undead: They're So Vein."  Give us a brief synopsis for our readers and then tell us how you came with the idea for this wonderful series?

Nosey senior citizen annoys foul fanged tyke in a public restroom—gets fanged—(I won't tell you who becomes her first meal, no spoilers) goes home with newly acquired fangs and a body to die for. Her family of non estrogen producing women takes one look at her and a domino effect quickly ensues, leaving only one member, who doesn't want to die for a tight butt and perky boobs, the sole voice of reason. The women soon find out feedin' ain't easy, and turn to Walmart literature for answers.

One of them turns a raccoon into a vampoon—oops there goes the ecosystem—shit happens. However, the vampire council was not amused and sent a wolf with a message. He looked real hot after he shifted, naked and all, that's probably why no one listened to the werewolf's warning.

I came up with the idea after a dream I had where the my crazy family of women were turned into vampires. After I stopped laughing, I sat at the computer and figured if I could write the book, they really would be immortal. It was just supposed to be a Christmas gift for them. It turned out to be more.

If you're Susan and this is your family (art imitating life) how do you compare how your family reacts to crisis situations in real life as compared to their reactions in the novel?

Brian, I can slap this family in any situation and, with or without fangs, they would react the same. We do crass, controlling, and so entertainingly bitchy—we even do stupid—but none us does submissive.

Your characters spend most of the time in self-imposed mass hysteria in your novel.  Does writing this wear you out emotionally?

 Trying NOT to write this way would be much more stressful. We consider the self-imposed mass hysteria and quickened pulse rates our way of keeping aerobically fit. Just slap us all in one room together and we get a really good verbal and cardiac workout every time.

How do you come up with this wonderful dialogue?

From many years of sitting in my mother's living room during any family event. We all have a very open relationship. Nothing is sacred among the women in my family and the dialogue is honest and always amusing.

What is up with Susan and Marcus?  They are deeply attracted to each other but Susan is determined to resist mating with him.  Why?

You know, I think Susan would give it up more if Marcus wasn't so bossy. He keeps saying shit like,"Stop shoving JoAnn in a casket and burying it under the garage, Susan. Be more respectful, Susan. It's not nice to suggest you might bitch-slap your mother if she opens her mouth again. Don't shove Christopher's head in the toilet until the bubbles go away, Susan." It's a real buzz-kill, ya know? Anyway, I think a high priority total commitment kind of relationship is a stretch with Susan's control issues.

Spoiler: Marcus and Susan do mate in the first book—going down (ahem) the Interstate at 75 miles an hour with five cars of vamps vying for a better view—but sexual tension remains high in all three books.

What are reader's reactions to Christopher, the kid vamp?  And who dresses him?

Christopher dresses himself because everything Christopher does has a reason behind it. In the first book we begin to delve into the complex personality of the man living inside of the boy's body. I love writing scenes with Christopher in them—the readers love him—and he's always good for a laugh. While writing the second book I had a fifty-fifty split with followers over whether the boy should be allowed a physical relationship. It was a hard decision, but in the third book you'll see who won that argument.

What's your favorite and least favorite thing about writing?

My favorite thing would be typing away, laughing out loud while my characters go all wonky on me. They crack me up with their outbursts and constant surprises. Like who would have thought my bible toting sister would have a child with a demon? Ooops, another spoiler - third book. Dang, maybe you'll want to edit that out? LOL

My least favorite thing—writing a damn query! I'm a wordy bitch. One or two paragraphs? Come on!

What is the most surprising thing you've learned while writing?

That I have five women, a fairy, troll, werewolf, demon, shape shifter dragon, and several sexy immortals living in my brain. And they won't go home!

What do think of twilight?

Actually, I liked Twilight, read all three books.

What advice would you give indie writers?

Market your book, don't sit back and wish it a success.

What advice would you give newbie writers?

Write for you, not for what you think the market wants. It changes to often. Have patience when it comes to querying, grow some tough skin, and never give up. If you have a good story to tell, someone out there wants to sell it. Start now and research marketing your book because later it will be the key to your success.

Where can readers find you?

Amazon and Barnes and Noble, paperback, kindle and nook

Thank you Susan!

And here is another interview with Susan on Jeanne Bannon's Blog:

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Coming this week!

We have interviews with Susan Stec on her novel "The Grateful Undead: They are so vein."

And a special guest we're thrilled to have ZeeZak, a for real zombie!

Thursday, October 20, 2011

Interview with Brian Poor author of the Megazaur series

Tonight we're roasting—I mean interviewing Brian Poor, my co-collaborator in this crazy endeavor called Prehysteria Imprints.  His 2nd novel Megazaur: Akysha's Fury is our first effort and it'll be followed by my novel Freaking Wicked sometime in Jan or Feb. Oh by the way i'm Bryant James my questions will be in grey and Brian's answers in green.

So, let's get down to it and fill free to jump in with questions and comments at any time. 

Okay Brian, What does it take to be a Megazaur (dino rider) in your novel?  What do you have to do to control a T-rex with your mind?

Well, you have to be the strongest most stubborn minded individual in the omada.  You have to have  the attitude that nobody gets in your way, and they shouldn't even dare to think about getting in your way, cause you'll tear them apart.

What in the hell is an Omada?

Omada is Greek for the word tribe.  There are 12 tribes of dino-riders and each has a particular dinosaur they omogolize with.

Okay, I know your just dying to reveal some of your ingenuity…What does each name of the 12 Omadas reflect?

It tells you what dinosaur they ride…A(rex)nos ride the T-rex.  T(cer)nos ride the triceratops, etc.

In the first book (Megazaur: the 13th Omada) the 13th Omada had no real dino-riders, just some they kind of used as horses.  But no meat-eaters like the T-rex.  They depended on Technology to protect them.  Why in this book do they suddenly have Megazaurs?  I thought that went against the father god's wishes?

In the first novel (Megazaur: the 13th Omada) a former Jugnid Megazaur serving in the 13th Omadas army gets a 2nd chance with a giganotosaurus.  And remember the gods are modeled after Greek Mythology.  They all have their own agendas.  So In this novel you see they have at least three Megazaurs.  They are still greatly outnumbered.

You made it clear the Megazaurs control their dinos by strength of will, and the rider and the dino read each other's emotions, telepathically (thru color).  So how is it Okaru (giganotosaur) can talk to Akysha using words?  And why the []'s when they do talk?

It's a different type of omogilization.  A nation of former slaves will have problems showing the prerequisite 'alpha personality' need to rule a dino with their will.  That goes against everything their culture is built on.  So their bonds with the Gigantozaur are a volunteer partnership.  But don't think the Giga is smarter just because they can talk to their riders.  Each dino's emotions and personality is transmitted thru colors and can be translated to words.  The Megazaurs of the 12 omadas just don't listen.

As for the []'s—I needed someway to distinguish telepathic communication from direct thought and dialogue.  That's what I came up with.  I just hope it doesn't annoy the reader.

Yeah that brings up another thing…lol.  What is up with cutting off sentences with the three dots?

LOL, my word program refused to make the long hyphen, so I used that.  It's my signature trademark now.

Writing 'rules' or guidelines say that action sequences should be short sentences.  You're suppose to save the complex sentence structure for passive moments.  Do you think you're above the rules?  I mean, seriously dude, your action sentences could be easily broken into two or even three sentences.

Good question.  For new authors struggling to figure out how to write, I recommend following the rules to develop good writing habits.  However…

there he goes, LOL

Writing a novel is not telling the reader a story but rather strapping them onto a homemade rocket and lighting the fuse.  LOL—the well mannered author will tell them—good luck and have fun—all the while laughing manically.  As an author, I try to make my novel a rollercoaster ride.  And I want it to have all the elements of a good coaster.  Suspense (lift hill), surprise turns, hidden hills, dives into tunnels, and of course that first huge plunge.  I want to give them airtime and I want give the reader those moments when the coaster goes thru the break-run giving the rider a  chance to catch their breath.

Soo…I try very hard to choreograph my story with my words.  I'm designing the ride, so My responsibly is to grab the reader and throw them in the train and send them screaming down the tracks.

I'm very particular about action sequences.  I rewrite them about 3 to 4 times just to get them right.  To answer your question, there are times when I want the action to continue into the effect—thus the complex sentence.  Eg: Sam smacked Eric in the nose, smearing his face with blood and knocking him to the floor in a daze.  But there also times when you want the short sentence because the effect of the action isn't important and only bogs the reader down.  And trust me I agonize over those things and just not sentences.  Pacing is everything.  Plunge the reader down a huge drop and then give them a chance to say OMG before twisting them around into a loop.  Hopefully I'm doing that.  So yeah I feel like I know what I'm doing and can break the rules. LOL

I'll give you credit and I'm not saying this as your partner.  Most times your pacing is nearly perfect even when it flies in the face of convention.

Yeah, well I hate convention when it tells me I have to keep the book roaring down the road with out pit-stops or even downshifting.  Or the push to have every chapter end in a cliffhanger. Novels aren't movies.  They're not for people with short attention-spans. I read because I want to get inside the characters head and know what he's thinking.  Boom this happens and how do they react to that.  What's going thru their head.  I just like to pause sometimes to let the reader catch his breath and maybe emphasize a particular sequence.

Yeah you have a reputation as a head hopper…lol  I'll let em read it to see what I mean.  But what do you struggle with as a writer?

Descriptions, descriptions!  God I hate writing them.  As a reader I just want a sketchy, glossed over description.  I want to get right to it and into that character's head.  I don't need to know what they look lie, my mind draws its own image from their thoughts, actions, and dialogue.  Usually I skip over those and then make myself go back and write them. LOL

Okay Now I'm going to elaborate on the comments I've made about you writing like a girl—

You're just mean—

You have this great story and a Kick-ass character in Akysha.  I mean she could be Laura Croft, but yet you somehow manage to capture the girl in her.  When she's thrust into action she doesn't hesitate, she just goes for the kill.  But when she's not, she acts very much like the young, inexperienced woman she is.  She worries about everything and you really show how being the leader really burdens her with responsibility.  And she hates it.  Not in the heavy handed, over-melodramatic way of a certain popular character in a popular Vampire series we won't mention---because I hate that book, but you seemed to capture the insecure-uncertain teenager in Akysha.  You find a balance between the gung-ho—I wanna kick some ass—girl, to the OMG I feel so overwhelmed with all this woman.  How—as a guy—did you achieve this balance without really being a woman in disguise?

Lol, like most of my characters, Akysha just came to life and took over.  Any script I had for her went out the window, she did she what she wanted and I just followed writing it down.  And most of my characters are like that.  They come to life and do what they want. But no, I'm not a woman and can't relate to exactly how it feels to be a woman, let alone a teenager growing into an adult.  Akysha just woke up and I think she's pretty real.

Oh, she's real all right.  The contrast is good, though I'd love to get some outside opinion on this. (Hint hint)  I know you work-shopped this in a writers group and got a lot of criticism on the lack of conflict you thrust on her.  Wanna explain?

There is overt conflict and subtle conflict.  I personally get tired of what I call the Spiderman syndrome.  You have a superhero that's constantly getting his butt kicked and having all this external conflict dropped on him.  I mean he swings out to break up a bank robbery, gets leveled by the green Goblin, and then is late for a date or class and gets in trouble.  And I see a lot of manufactured conflict in today's drama.  You know I'm a huge star wars fan, but one of my biggest crits of that franchise is the Jedi.  They're suppose to be the superhero's of that world, but in almost every fight, it gets dragged out to put conflict in it.  Like when Dooku and Yoda fight in number 2.  First there is a battle of throwing thing then they get to the light-saber duel.  Why not inter-mix it.  You don't really see a good fight until Anakin and Obi-wan go at it.

Akysha's got a gift.  Her sword is already cutting off your head before she has time to think it.  Nobody is going to survive for more than a few seconds going head to head with her.  The raptors are the same as a regular warrior.  You have to gang up on her and even then it's most likely a draw. But on the other hand she can't stand up by herself to an Allozaur or T-rex.  Stabbing a rex with a sword is like stabbing a human with a pen.  It won't kill or even debilitate, just hurt and make you mad.  And she knows that.  No…

I really wanted to give her subtle conflicts.  She wins every battle but is always losing the war.  She believes she was given this power to defend her 13th Omada from the next invasion by the 12 omadas, just like her father and she's worried that she will  fail when that time comes.  Plus, she doesn't fear dying for that cause, just that she can't live up to her father who did.  Akysha gets saddled with an Arexnos Megazaur (whom she has reason to hate for reason I won't  reveal so I don't give away a spoiler for the first novel.) and has to deal with that.  So she has the conflict she needs to arc with as a character it's just subtle.

That brings up another question.  You got a lot of criticism for having your two protagonist fall in love so early in the book.  Can you explain with out giving too much away?

Again back to the spiderman thing.  Serak and Akysha are meant to be together, but the purpose of their romance isn't so much to add more conflict.  Akysha has enough problems and she needs someone to help her balance that conflict or share it.  And there are small conflicts in their relationship, just nothing dramatic.  But I am a Star wars fan, and Akysha's purpose is to explore the balance between love and hate.

What do you mean?

Well, her powers amplify her emotions.  She is a forthright woman who sincerely believes it is her purpose and duty to protect the innocent.  To serve out justice for those who have no hope of it.  And ironically, her justice is meted out by killing people and dinosaurs with a sword.  And that pushes her to the edge of being out of control, to losing control of her emotions and killing out of pure hate.

Well that sounds like conflict to me…lol

Yeah, but going back to Star Wars and the story of Anakin/Darth Vader, love is the reason he turns to the Dark side.  He loves and therefore he can hate and is susceptible to turning.  I'm exploring the opposite.  Love is what keeps Akysha from going berserk and turning into an indiscriminate killing machine.  Therefore love had to come early into the Novel.

You're sex scene really shocked the hell out of me.  You are aware—unless you're writing romance—that you only write sex scenes to advance the plot?

Lol…both characters needed it badly and I wrote this in a workshop and was dared to write it.  I thought about it taking it out but it does at least define their relationship.

You talk about pacing and one area of the book I thought really dragged the pacing was the bit about the Apatozaur and Aruthra. 

Well, The Apatosaurus is my favorite dinosaur and after being shunned by Spielberg in Jurassic Park, I wanted to make sure ‘Brute’ had a big part.  Yeah that slowed down the pacing but I’m trying to throw in stuff for dinosaur fans and I also though the more ‘war minded’ of us would appreciate that. 

Let me ask you about dialogue tags.  There is a raging controversy about their use.  Your thoughts?

Again as a writer use everything to craft the story.  Sometimes dialogue tags can be used to show how a character reacts to the dialogue.  Sometimes I drop them when I want the dialogue to zip back and forth.  I also like to add direct thought as a reaction.  So to answer your question I vary and don’t let them drag down the pacing.  Its all about what you want to the reader to see, feel, and experience without jarring them out of your world.

I’m going to give a shout out to a writer who was my best friend when I was in the writer group---Susan Stec.  If you want to see how to write snappy, hilarious dialogue, check out her works--

I called her the queen of dialogue.  Examine how she uses dialogue tags and how she links action to them.  Her characters are running around in a neurotic state of hysteria for most of the novel.

Yeah, we’re  suppose to interview her next week, I’m looking forward to it!

Do you need to read the first Megazaur novel: the 13th omad, to read Akysha's fury?

No,the first Novel is a stand alone so you don't need to.  Now you will have to have read Meg2 to read Meg 3 when it comes out.

Which is when? 

I'm writing the 3rd and 4th now, so hopefully early spring.  We will launch them within weeks of each other and between now and then will let some excerpts slip out for our fans.

What kind of advice would you give to new writers?

Like you? LOL.  Join a workshop, like the NextBigWriter.  Learn how to show not tell.  Pick out an author you like and identify with and break down their writing stucture. Don't steal their work but emulate it until you find your voice and style.  Get use to editing and editing and then editing.  And most important. if your really like something you have written...a particular sentence or paragraph...delete it. it's probably too cutesy and will jar the reader.

You mean like this?
A steady rain botched the day’s plans and Akysha’s defiant stare at the meadow separating
the village from the Green Forest did nothing to dissuade it.

Yeah, I really liked that sentence and it set her mood instantly. as I say, not as I do.

LOL, see there is the woman coming out in you.  Okay folks that wraps up this interview but Brian promises to check in frequently to answer any comments or Questions.  Thanks for reading this!

Monday, October 17, 2011


We are going to roast. I mean interview, brian poor on his Novel--Megazaur: Akysha's fury on Thursday at seven pm for anyone who want to come in and join the fun!

Don't miss it!

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Despite my overwhelming need to call this the bathroom reader, because I do most of my reading in the bathroom, Brian and I decided to name it after our company name. Sooo...without futher ado...we would like to announce that we are open for business!